Post by Alexa Raven on Jan 2, 2014 3:34:38 GMT -5
Chapter Eight Authors Notes
First of all Hi Everyone. I actually got these two versions of chapter eight written a few days ago. However I figured why not start the New Year off with a bang right? I decided to do two versions of this chapter because I would like to be fair and give an alternative to people who are not always comfortable with sexual situations.
So in doing so I cut the sex from the one.. Which is fine. I actually was going to go more into detail then I did in the nc 17 version of this chapter but I am not sure just how well the idea is accepted as well as I've never actually written a love scene between two men before.
Though I could have made it more graphic I think it is fine the way it is. As I write this it is 3:30 in the morning my time, I am a bit tired but still up and drinking coffee. Anyways enjoy.
By the way I would like to explain before I go what my thoughts are on this chapter overall..
Ianto now knows what he has to do and why the Doctor couldn't go back in time to help Jack himself. Also it makes for a cool new Time Lord
Ianto's Tardis is a red phone box because and if you are a fan of the show etc.. Ianto is good in red. Red id his color. Also kind of wanted him to be a bit different. Also Ianto is an archivist at Torchwood so it was simply just to say he is the Archivist. Oh and there is a sonic pen in the whoverse. It's used by the fourth doctor,
Anyways hope you enjoy it whichever one you read. Oh and I have no idea whatsoever if anyone even reads these posts. If you do and want to comment below go ahead. It night be interesting to see what you think of my somewhat warped mind gets it's muses from.
If you got questions always feel free to ask. That way you know..
So in doing so I cut the sex from the one.. Which is fine. I actually was going to go more into detail then I did in the nc 17 version of this chapter but I am not sure just how well the idea is accepted as well as I've never actually written a love scene between two men before.
Though I could have made it more graphic I think it is fine the way it is. As I write this it is 3:30 in the morning my time, I am a bit tired but still up and drinking coffee. Anyways enjoy.
By the way I would like to explain before I go what my thoughts are on this chapter overall..
Ianto now knows what he has to do and why the Doctor couldn't go back in time to help Jack himself. Also it makes for a cool new Time Lord
Ianto's Tardis is a red phone box because and if you are a fan of the show etc.. Ianto is good in red. Red id his color. Also kind of wanted him to be a bit different. Also Ianto is an archivist at Torchwood so it was simply just to say he is the Archivist. Oh and there is a sonic pen in the whoverse. It's used by the fourth doctor,
Anyways hope you enjoy it whichever one you read. Oh and I have no idea whatsoever if anyone even reads these posts. If you do and want to comment below go ahead. It night be interesting to see what you think of my somewhat warped mind gets it's muses from.
If you got questions always feel free to ask. That way you know..